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Finest Formula in Fifty States by ~foreignconcepts:iconforeignconcepts:



Lightning pulled into Flo’s V8 cafe, looking stressed. “He won’t stop crying. Flo, what do I do? He won’t stop crying!”

Flo stopped what she was doing and look at him inquisitively. “You mean Nevan?”

“Yes Nevan! I can’t get him to stop!” He moved out of the way, allowing Flo to move closer to the bassinet. “Tell me what’s wrong with him.”

Flo looked down at the baby in the bassinet, crying loudly and working himself into a fit. “Well he’s probably hungry. When was the last time you fed him?”

“I’ve never fed him!” Lightning said, but paused when he saw the look on her face. “Yeah, that didn’t come out right. Sally- uh, Sally’s the last one who would’ve fed him, and she’s gone back to California!”

“Then he’s hungry. I take it Sally must’ve left you bottles and some formula, right?”

“Yeah, I brought them, they’re here somewhere.” Lightning frantically looked around in the bassinet. He quickly retrieved a bottle, which was already filled with formula and showed it to Flo. “Here, here it is.” He placed the bottle in front of Nevan and waited for him to respond. “Here, just take it...” He nervously nudged the bottle a little closer to the crying infant.

Flo watched as Nevan stayed where he was, screaming and oblivious. “You have to feed it to him.” She said.

Lightning turned to Flo. “How am I supposed to do that? I don’t even know how to hold a baby!”  

Flo sighed. “Give me the bottle.” She said, taking the bottle from Lightning before putting her tire around Nevan and scooping him up. “This is what you do.” She said, placing the wiggling infant in front of her and sticking the bottle in his mouth with the other tire, silencing him. She bracketed the baby and the bottle between both of her front tires, holding the bottle steady at an angle.

Lightning and Flo both watched as Nevan gulped down the formula, looking up at Flo intently. Flo looked back down, meeting the baby’s gaze with her own. She pursed her lips, suddenly feeling a rush of pain and emotion coming back from years before. She never thought she’d see another baby again in their lifetime in such a deserted town but here she was feeding one of all things. Tearing her eyes away, she looked up to see Ramone emerge from the body shop. It was the usual time when he decided to come over for supper, save for any lingering customers.

“Heh, finest formula in fifty states too I guess.” Lightning said, attempting to make light of the situation and take the focus away from his apparent ineptitude. “You really know how to feed everyone Flo.”

“Yeah.” Flo said, taking another quick look at the infant before placing him carefully but quickly in front of Lightning. “You can take him back now.” Her voice almost sounded choked with tears as she said it, and she turned quickly and left before Lightning could say anything else.

Ramone approached in time to watch the scene unfold. “Flo-” He started to say as she passed him.

“No, just... don’t. I don’t want to talk about it.” She replied, sensing the worried look he was giving her even from behind. “Not now.”
©2008-2009 ~foreignconcepts
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Author's Comments

Deleted scene from Chapter 4. Lightning overcomes his first babysitting hurdle, with a bit of help from Flo.

Warnings: things get a bit sad towards the end. I'm really not sure how much I'm going to follow the subplot in here yet... we'll see.

Cars (c) Disney/Pixar
Nevan (c) *Twintwosgirl (used with my permission)

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:icondogman15:
Hm, so did Flo and Ramone have a kid at one point?
:iconjustkaro43:
Ohhh wow! This deleted Deleted Scene is fantastic! I was laughing along in the beginning at Lightning's words and actions towards Nevan. Flo's motherly nature was nice to see as well, though the end had me thinking deeply. It really was sad, let me know if you do decide to follow the Subplot.

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Brian! The lovable jerk - bringing the worst out of cars since 1950.
:iconforever-art-fan:
Poor Flo. That must've bring back hard memories for her.
That is your choice to use this subplot but I like to see how that comes out.
Till next time.
:iconnikchik-11:
Poor Flo! :(

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You....you....PUMPKIN BANGER! FIRST YOU RAPE A WITCH, NOW YOU'RE BANGING MY PUMPKIN!
:iconforeignconcepts:
Yeah :(

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(¯`·.¸¸.·´¯`·.¸¸.-> never be afraid to make waves. or ride them. <3

98% of Cars fans (NOT just girls) believe that cars can have sex and/or slashes the characters. IF YOU believe in this too, then ROCK DA FUCK ON! :D
:iconforeignconcepts:
You'll see. The subplot is going to be expanded in the story, it's just to which degree I'm not quite sure yet.

I also posted chapter 9 of I Could Get Used To This last night :D

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(¯`·.¸¸.·´¯`·.¸¸.-> never be afraid to make waves. or ride them. <3

98% of Cars fans (NOT just girls) believe that cars can have sex and/or slashes the characters. IF YOU believe in this too, then ROCK DA FUCK ON! :D
:iconforeignconcepts:
Aww, thanks :) yeah. the ending was sad. I am going to expand on the subplot, just to which degree I don't know. It will depend on people's reactions I think.

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(¯`·.¸¸.·´¯`·.¸¸.-> never be afraid to make waves. or ride them. <3

98% of Cars fans (NOT just girls) believe that cars can have sex and/or slashes the characters. IF YOU believe in this too, then ROCK DA FUCK ON! :D
:iconforeignconcepts:
I recognize you! ;)

It did bring back some hard memories for Flo, stirring up emotional stuff with her for sure. The subplot is going to be in there, I've had it planned for awhile, but to what degree I will follow it, i'm not sure yet. I want to see more reaction to this and be able to gauge it appropriately before I decide, I think.

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(¯`·.¸¸.·´¯`·.¸¸.-> never be afraid to make waves. or ride them. <3

98% of Cars fans (NOT just girls) believe that cars can have sex and/or slashes the characters. IF YOU believe in this too, then ROCK DA FUCK ON! :D
:iconjustkaro43:
Well, if you do decide to continue it further, I'd be more than happy to read. I thought this deleted scene was very interesting, and the subplot really has my attention.

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Brian! The lovable jerk - bringing the worst out of cars since 1950.

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